under the influence

7 thoughts on “under the influence”

  1. Congrats, it takes a lot to actually capture my attention fully. I am always multi tasking. I really enjoyed this poem, possibly because it strays from the norm and actually says something. Well done. Would it be ok if I reblogged this one?

  2. Reblogged this on HarsH ReaLiTy and commented:
    This poem was posted from https://rawlibrary.wordpress.com/2013/02/01/under-the-influence/
    I rarely reblog, perhaps I may start doing that more often for my readers since I do read a ton of posts a day, I had to reblog this one. Not only could I smell the alcohol, which while being at work was maddening enough, but her words rang loudly for me because they were not what I was expecting. I really was thrown off by each line, to me that is Poetry, well done Raw Library.
    -Opinionated Man

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